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Sunday, December 9, 2012

Chapter 19 - Standard Deviants

Dear Readers

Warning - this chapter has disturbing content. Please use your discretion and do not read if explicit and deviant sexual acts bothers you.
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“Khushi?” ASR spoke after several moments of relishing her in his arms.
“Mmmm” she mumbled against his goose pimpled skin as she snuggled closer, feeling his skin and smattering of hair on her cheek.

Comfort food, she thought.

She circled him and ran her fingers on his back, without noticing the effect it was having on him. He crushed her closer and she welcomed the tightness closing around her.

“Mmm, this feels good.” She noted satisfied. He kissed the top of her head and breathed in to steady his wildly beating pulse. It was impossible to keep his thoughts straight knowing he could simply lift her to his bed and ravage her, willingly, lovingly and eagerly.

“Khushi, I'm sorry.” 

"For what?" she asked looking into his eyes.

"For leaving your house like that. I wish I had explained everything." 

"Mmmm." she simply said without asking for further explanations.

"Khushi...we've got a lot to do."He hated the reminder.

“Yep, ok….” She withdrew and lowered her head in slight embarrassment of the naked expression of her need for him. He lifted her chin and smiled. She blinked and smiled back, reassured by the honesty on his face.

“Don’t you want to know why they pull off the security detail at your house?” he asked.

She nodded. He held her arm gently and took off her coat and hat. He made her comfortable in his living room and got himself a sweater before he froze to death. A pot of coffee later, the two snuggled in the living sofa and ASR recounted the events of the day. Khushi listened to every word with rapt attention.

He concluded, “The question, Khushi, is this – what is the motive? Why did the men chase the Sabres if all they wanted was to sell them in the black market? And the Sabres are not really antiques. Although they are worth some money, they definitely are not worth the number of murders laying in their wake. So what is the motive?”

Khushi took a sip of her coffee and her brows knitted thinking about the last 15 days that had turned her life upside down starting with the murder of the man in her apartment. She shuddered to think it was all over, it seemed too simple.
“What does Kevin think?” she asked

“Kevin believes the men were acting alone, kind of like a splinter group from the main brotherhood of mafia. Their confession all but absolves everyone but them. It’s hard for me to believe that the Jewish mafia would allow a splinter group to thrive and that the group will have the kind of reach these men had to all the royal families.” ASR exhaled and stretched on the sofa, his mind stormed with questions.

She wanted to reach out and caress his thick dark hair, to erase the worry lines creasing his forehead, to kiss him. But she knew there was no time to lose. Her entire existence lay in question and if indeed the case was cracked, it meant she was free.

“What now?” she asked, almost afraid, in an ironic sense, that it was all over.
“It’s not over.” He responded, as if in answer to her question, almost driving her to relief that they could still legitimately spend time together.
“You are off the case. They plan to close the case. What is left to do?” she needed further assurance.

“Well” he stood up and stretched, not a man to sit idle for long hours.
“For one, I need to find out what’s with Shyam. And then I need to have a conversation with NK. And then we meet Kevin and my cryptographer friends Avni and Akash in University of Chicago.” He made mental notes looking out of the window.

“Wow! Looks like we have our work cut out for us! Why Shyam?” she asked, standing up and placing her coffee on the table.

“Don’t you want to know why he got engaged to you? I understand your motives but I still don’t get his.” He turned to face her and cocked his head, curiosity writ on his face.
She folded her arms across her chest in defiance to the thoughts of Shyam and reacted, “I think he wanted to look good. A docile, pliable fiancĂ©e, an upcoming career that is sure to win him the Surgeon Generalship of the state of Illinois. He just wanted to look good.” She convinced herself of the truth of her conjecture.

“Wait…he is vying for the office of Surgeon General?” he asked.
“Yes, he was planning to put in his nomination papers. He has the complete support of the Northwestern community and he is connected with the local congressman and Senators. His confirmation is all but given.” She waved her hand as if it was a natural thing to happen.

“Bingo! That’s it then!” ASR began pacing his room in excited paces, “He is creating an image of perfection with you in it. I mean look at you, you come from a perfect family.”
Khushi sniggered and shook her head.

“No, no, think about it. No one knows about you being a princess.”
She snorted louder and held out her palms to stop, “Stop ASR, please don’t remind me of my princely status. Bastard is more like it.”

“Come on, Khushi. Stay with me for a minute. I mean Shyam wants to look perfect. He has everything going for him. He finds out about your dad and then he makes his move on you and uses blackmail to get engaged to you. Why would he do that? Why jeopardize his future with blackmailing you when he can simply not be engaged to you?” he paced a few more times while Khushi pulled her hair up and tied it in a pony tail, getting ready for some cerebral tasks.

“Unless…unless he has something bigger he needs to hide.” He stopped in his tracks and rubbed his chin, he asked again, “Was there anything about him that struck you as odd?”

Khushi shook her head. He looked disappointed.
“Wait a minute. Of course, how stupid of me.” She smacked her forehead.
“What? What is it?” he was dying of impatience.
“He never wanted to have sex with me.” She blurted out and instantly regretted her choice of words.

ASR’s face was awash in relief followed by incredulity.

“Now, that is odd.” He smirked.
“It is, isn’t it? We never crossed that far, even after our third date, even after he proposed to me, even before he blackmailed me. And during our early months every time I tried to get closer, he always had an excuse. And you know what, if I am not mistaken he never had a girl friend before me.” She was a fountain of information suddenly.
“Never?”
“Nah-uh. Never. He was sought after but never got into a relationship, not even a casual one. And now that I think about it, there were even rumors that he might be, you know..” she hesitated to continue.

“Impotent?” ASR raised his brow, attempting to help.
“No!” she exclaimed.
“Then?”
“Deviant.”
“Deviant? That begs further investigation.”

She was about to turn to the kitchen when he grabbed her arm and pulled her to him. She slammed to his chest and blurted out.

“What are you doing?” she asked and realized it was a stupid question. He was smiling a wicked grin and without further ado, he claimed her mouth. She welcomed it by snaking her arms around his neck and arching back to feel his entire muscled mass against her.

A few minutes passed as the kiss deepened and tongues explored anew. Breathless, both of them released each other and caught their breaths, resting their foreheads on each other.
“I….I am sorry, Khushi, I just couldn’t help…”he began.
“Shut up and kiss me again.” She ordered with a naughty smile. Another kiss followed as the two stood entwined in his living room, feeling each other and giving as much as taking comfort in each others’ arms.

He showered kisses on the tip of her nose, eyes and jawline before nuzzling her neck in sheer need to devour every inch of her. He pulled back by force.
“We need to stop. We have a lot to do.” He held her face in his palms and implored with earnestness.
She nodded and liked the sound of how he said “we” instead of “I”. They were a team.

The plan was set. They began with Shyam at Khushi’s behest. She wanted that chapter out and done before she could figure out what to do. ASR had a pattern of Shyam’s activities in his file and he figured, this being Christmas and the fact that Shyam was out of Khushi’s house, he must have other plans.

They two staked out in the street outside Shyam’s mansion for good hour. They spoke little, both were afraid of betraying the nervous energy and palpable attraction they felt, that could ruin their chase. An hour later, Shyam’s garage door opened.


ASR watched the man get out of the large mansion in his flamboyant car. Khushi cringed at the sight and squeezed ASRs hand that she was holding in a death grip. ASR put his car in gear and cruised behind Shyam's car. The travesty of a car was a misfit even in the plush neighborhood just as the man driving it.

The two cars went one after the other into the throng of friday traffic. To ASR's surprise, Shyam's car turned into the posh clubbing district of downtown, peppered with tony pubs, bars, and dance clubs. Khushi's eyes widened as she took in the hints of hedonistic pleasures of the night promised by the exclusive and secretive clubs of the area. ASR's heart went out to her at the obvious surprise in her face and he realized Khushi had no inkling that Shyam had a side to him.

His car pulled into an expansive entrance of a majestic club as a valet stood at service. Shyam got out of the car with all the elegance of a panther and dropped the key into the valet's waiting hands. As he entered the lobby a curvaceous figure of a woman emerged from the lobby waiting area and linked her arms into his. The two figures receded deep inside.

ASR knew the club was membership only and they had to find another way to get in. A few blocks way, they parked the car in metered parking. Khushi pulled her hat down in place and snuggled her scarf around her neck tighter. ASR held out his hands and she clasped it before the two walked towards the club.

Khushi was shivering with a mix of fear and excitement. Other than the inadvertent murder of a man, she had never done anything this covert and out of character activity in her life. ASR brought out the curious child in her and for that she was ever grateful to him. The two went to the back alley of the building where large dumpsters and heaps of black garbage bags littered the narrowed space. The two ducked behind one of the large dumpsters as the back door to the building opened and a harried looking janitor dumped few more bags onto the overflowing pile of bags. As the man left, the automatically locked back door began closing smoothly, buffered by the hydraulic hinge. ASR jack knived the opening with his foot and push it further open.

Khushi had a growing sense of foreboding. Shyam's secrets lay in this building. The question was how dirty was the secret. She was about to find out.

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ASR and Khushi passed the large kitchen of the club, rousing some curious eyes among the kitchen staff. It was a busy evening and no one seemed to care enough to stop them. The two crossed into the main restaurant and passed on the edges to enter the service entrance. The pounding music filled the corridors and aisles of the club while plush carpet buffered their footsteps. They found a service elevator and got into it. The array of buttons on the elevator had them look at each other with curiosity. Lounge 7, Hedonism Bar, Floor Enigma, Voyeur’s Paradise and finally, B&G Arena. 

ASR and Khushi exchanged looks, unable to figure out which floor they should go. B&G Arena sounded weird enough to try and Khushi nodded a tacit agreement. It was lucky they had both changed to their finer duds, helping them evade undue attention. As the elevator rose up, so did Khushi’s anxiety. The club, its patrons, everything about it gave an aura of exclusivity to the point of exuding a sense of secrecy, a sinister presence sure to rock her foundation. But she felt ready for closure.

Each floor had more patrons exit than enter and finally only the two remained in the elevator. The door opened on the B&G floor to a quiet aisle with plush oriental carpet. The entrance lobby had aisle go around a circular central wall. ASR gestured to walk on side to find the entrance to the circular structure. Dull sounds of music pounded from behind the structure. Khushi clasped his hands tightly. Around the opposite end of the elevator was nondescript door.

ASR pushed the door lightly, and it opened without objection. As the two entered a very darkened room, it took their eyes a few moments to adjust. What they saw left them both gasping.

At the center of the circular structure was a grotesque sight of a man and a woman bound and gagged while three others performed heinous sexual acts on them using obscene paraphernalia. Khushi’s hand shot to cover her mouth in an effort to stop her from keeling over. ASR steadied her and whispered in to her ears muffled by the loud trance music, “Steady Khushi. We need to find Shyam.”

She took a few quick breaths to hold herself steady as the two walked among the throng gathered around the central dais where the deviants enacted a scene. Khushi averted her eyes, unable to bear the loud screams and pained cries of the actors. ASR jerked her to a stop when he spotted Shyam enter a small private booth, one among the many peppered around the stage. No one noticed the couple as the act got louder and frantic, diverting the attention of all and sundry to the stage.

ASR led the way until they reached the booth, he nudged the door open softly, leading into a small boudoir with a plush bed and more paraphernalia littered all around. Shyam was on the bed surrounded by three women engaged in various sexual acts. Khushi gasped at the sight when she noticed a saran wrap on Shyam's face, asphyxiating him as he was on the cusp of his release.

It all made sense to her now. The year of engagement with this wretched man had torn her inside, leaving her unable to have a healthy relationships until ASR came along. She wanted to make sure Shyam never returned to her life or hurt her family in any shape or form. In that moment, she found extraordinary courage, driven by self preservation and sense of righteousness. She knew what she had to do.

Khush whipped out her phone and began clicking pictures.

“Hey, who are you?” screamed a girl as the other two girls squealed and ran for cover. Shyam forgot he was almost ready to come when he sat up and stared straight into Khushi’s camera. Khushi smiled.

“That’s a really good pose. Dr. Shyam Jha!” she clicked a few more as the girls raised ruckus and Shyam scrambled from the bed. ASR pushed him back while the loud noises brought the attention of the bouncers who blocked the door to the booth.

Khushi quickly hid her phone in her purse without the notice of the bouncers. One of the large black man caught ASR by the collar and threw him out of the booth. The other clasped Khushi around her waist and lifted her off the floor and walked out.

The noise had caused enough furor on the floor that the act was stopped the other patrons covered their faces to avoid detection by intruders. Few minutes later ASR and Khushi found themselves thrown out of the building, literally, landing on their derrieres in the same alley they had used to get in. As the bouncers began to rough handle them further, ASR connected his knee to his attacker's nuts while Khushi used her fingers to poke the eyes of her attacker. It bought them enough time to get on their feet and run out into the crowded side streets, rife with Christmas revelers.

They waded through the crowds as fast as they could until they found their parked car.
“Change?” Khushi asked, hoping to feed the parking meter that had overrun its hour.

ASR laughed breathless, “Are you kidding me? Let’s go!” he pulled the car out and blended into the traffic. He checked the rear view mirror for a tense few minutes before he was assured that no one was following them.

“Well, that was interesting!” he panted.

“Holy fucking mother of shit! What the hell was that?” Khushi gushed breathlessly and began laughing hysterically.

ASR shot her a curious look, astonished at her incredible composure after the disturbing sights. He had seen it all in his line of work but her? 

Of course, she is a doctor, an ER doctor, she has seen eough gore, tough girl. 

“I can’t believe it. Shyam fucking Jha, literally fucking Jha likes asphyxiation. Look at this!!” she screamed and showed him the picture she had shot of Shyam, “Can you believe that? He is not freaking hurting me and my family ever! Bastard, the motherfucking son of a bitch!” she was half hysterical, half laughing and mostly jubilant.

“You want to save some cuss words for later?” He chuckled, enamored by her potty mouth, which he found strangely endearing.

“Fuck No! I am free, Arnav. Can’t you see that? I am free, finally! I have nothing to fear.” She threw her head back and laughed a good belly laugh before she leaned towards him and kissed him on his cheek.

“Careful missy, I am driving.” He laughed.

She sat back and breathed in many times, calming her nerves. She didn't have to feel guilty breaking her engagement to Shyam. He could never hurt her again.

“Arnav.” She turned her head and looked at him, “I am free.”

He liked the sound of it and Christmas was still not over.

102 comments:

  1. HI SJ!!
    Guess what? I've been stalking your Blog like crazy...LOL
    But i can totally understand your situation...handling work AND a kid altogether, is NO piece of cake...update when ever you can sweetheart :)
    BTW, loved the teaser, cant wait to read the chapter...
    tc, love
    JIA (Pinkss)

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  2. Aww SJ this is getting so damn intense I loved the little sneak peek :)

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  3. Oh Oh! I am excited about the next chapter. Finally we will get some inkling into this Shyam’s mysterious character. Thanks for the sneak peak. :)

    P.S. Good luck with everything! :)

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  4. Thanks for the update was stalking you blog all the time.
    All the best for both ur exams.God help both of you with exams
    Update when you can, Shyam has a secret life can't wait for this to unravel.
    Good Luck,
    KAVITA 1970

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  5. wow, what a sneak peek..i can't wait for shyam's exposure!! i hope a&k will find something!

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    1. wow, i didn't expect that!!
      and now khushi is freee, what a relief!!

      thanks for the update :)

      toblerone

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  6. SJ!

    Loved the sneak peak!

    Wishing you good luck with studies and work. And wishing your kid good luck too. :)

    Thank you!
    Sachi / JerryTheMouse

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  7. The teaser was sooo captivating.....will be waiting eagerly for the chapter.....take your time.....family comes first and we understand.....good luck with your exams ....hope to c u soon


    Shweta1691

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    1. Finally she is free !!!!oh this was brilliant.....she took snaps.......awesome !!!!
      Loved it

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  8. Loved the teaser, its really exiting
    Shyams exposure =-O

    Take ur time...all the best for urs and ur kids exams

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  9. Loved the teaser, its really exiting
    Shyams exposure =-O

    Take ur time...all the best for urs and ur kids exams

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  10. The sneak peak will keep us on the edge of our chair for sure ...
    All the best for your exams ...

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    1. That was one hell of a revelation for Khushi ...
      Shyam always creeped me out ...

      Awsome ... SJ tussi great ho ...

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  11. Thank you so much :-D

    All the best. Just got out of my procrastination and getting down to attacking my own deadlines, so.......
    Despite not making many posts, just reading and 'liking' all posts is 'time consuming' :-))))

    Blogs dont have a like button. You have to actually type a thanks. :-D That is sad :-((

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    1. This story is becoming more and more interesting but sometimes it is good there is a gap because it them makes you go back and read again, which then throws up new understanding of the story and appreciate you all the more.

      Thanks :-)

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  12. this is sneak-peak so full update coming soon.
    Thnaks SJ, inspite of busy schedule you managed to give us this. It was thrilling. A music in thrillers is already playing in mind and am eagerly witing to know Shyam's dirty secret along with ASR and Khushi.
    -shree10

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  13. Sneek peak, itself was an adventurous piece...waiting for the whole scene to unfold..Take your time...will be stalking!

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  14. Hi SJ,

    you have increased my curiosity by 1000 times...take ur time and update...good luck to u and ur kid...

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  15. SJ, the teaser was so thrilling.... as i was in place of Khusi and going after Shyam to find out his dirty secrets!!! Oh dear... its getting more intense..... cant wait for next!!!
    update soon....

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  16. SJ SJ SJJJJJJJJJJ

    Why just the teaser my busy bee... Although agar teaser is a dhamaka then I am sure as hell ready for the explosion.

    Adventure... Arnav.... Khushi.... super nice

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  17. All the best to you and ur kid..! :)

    And I am SO glad to see you back.. <3 Awesome sneak peak... Want to know what Arnav and Khushi are up to ..:O

    And take your time SJ.. :) Personla life and family comes first :) We can wait.. ;)

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  18. All the best to you and ur kid .. :) It must be so hectic for you..

    And really glad to see you back.. Sneak Peak is awesome.. :D Want to know what Arnav and Khushi are up to.. :O

    And take your time SJ.. Personal life comes first.. <3 We can wait.. ;)

    God Bless you. :)

    P.S: Sorry if my comment is posted twice.. :/ Net is acting crazy.. :/

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  19. No Problem, SJ!!!take your time...

    About the teaser....it is intriguing..my nerves are much more frenzied than Khushi at the moment...just want to know what dirty secrets does the insalubrious Shyam have???
    Will wait for you to update...

    Aanchal15-IF

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  20. YAAY!! finally!, love this, waiting for shyam's

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    1. ha ha ha that was so funny with shayam. Khushi with her pictures! she is free now. go ASR there is your chance now take it.
      latha

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  22. Ohh SJ!!

    u have no clue how the wait kills!! *sigh*

    Do hope u get time to update!!

    ~P

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  23. Hey SJ,
    I was turning a stalker.. This sneak peak has just piqued my interest more.. Waiting with a bated breath for the adventure of ASR and Khushi.

    Shrutee

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  24. oiiiiiiii panther in a prawl again ....loving the suspence intensity n chemistry all rolled up in tgat teaser ... u make ASR really charismatic...n ever so loveable...n shyam equally attractive in a negative way...

    cant get enough of these 2. n their fight over khushi.

    SJ i understand its not easy to juggle kids work n xchl...so update at ur convinience n we shall always be here to drop by n read ur oh so magnetic updates.

    avni highonshows IF

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  25. Hi SJ, have been stalking almost everyday since ur last update. But the sneak peak made up for all of the wait. I'm sure everybody's curious to know about Shyam's dirty secrets and why he needs khushi for a fake engagement.
    Regarding the updates, I'll just like to say that Inspite of having so much on ur plate u r still entertaining us with such an enthralling story, so plz take ur time & update whenever u think is possible. We all understand & are not going anywhere :)
    I.F-deepa876

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  26. Dear SJ
    Reading this in one go for the first time, sitting on a hospital bed, can u believe that I am sooo hooked to your amazing story!! My hat off to you n i bow down to you for the sheer mastery and flow of the story , plots and characters you present with such flawless beauty!!
    Oh i know i can die a happy person having read such exhilarating master piece. I had followed your posts in IF but this is my first time reading your FF.
    I can easily relate to you being a mother,wife, professional and a writer on top of it although me no writer but a mother of 3 girls(from teens to 4yr old),working professional, businesswoman n battling terminal illness but i am hunmbled by your talent. More power to your pen.
    Take care!

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    1. Not sure if you have read her other work called The Fillagred Sun. It is a masterpiece. Its complete and a must read if you like serial junkies stories.
      SD

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    2. Can relate to you. I too am a big fan of sj's work. I am also a mother of two growing children and have spent a long time in hospitalbattling a heart problem and all possible complications attached to it. Beautifully written stories like the sabre chronicles and Filligreed sun are the best distraction possible when you forget your troubles for some tims

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  27. finally something from your blog lol

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  28. i love the feeling of freedom that khushi is enjoying. it can be stifling to be in such a relationship

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  29. It was absoutley lovely to see an update from you!
    And oh my god, what an update it was....so Dr. Jha likes things a little rough and kinky?? LOL! Just picturing that whole scene my head had me laughing so hard!!
    Thank you so much for giving that bastard what he deserved, now he can never mess with Khushi or her family again!
    "I am free", best line ever. Perfectly describes how Khushi was imprisoned by Shyam and how bow she is free of him and can find actual love elsewhere (like a certain Mr. Arnav Singh Raizada)

    Once again thanks for the update, it was throughly enjoyed!

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  30. A thrilling chapter. This story delves into the dark and unexplored areas, and you have very tastefully penned every word down, stupendous SJ!:)

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  31. A thrilling chapter! This story delves into the dark and the unexplored areas of fiction, which is refreshing to read since you have penned every word down tastefully. Stupendous work SJ!:)

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  32. That was thrilling... the chase!!! she took pictures..... LOL!!! but seriously Kinky stuff!!! Shyam Jha the prick likes kinky stuff!!! hahahahaha........
    I was laughing hard....poor khusi, she was stuck with that bastard for so long!! So now she is finally free........... loving where is the story is going dear........
    keep writing!!
    great update!!

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  33. Had been waiting since long for this update. Loved it. I am sitting tight on the roller coaster for the next one.

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  34. Ok.. So Shyam wanted to project himself straight and perfect. Wanted Khushi as a trophy wife? Is it the only reason OR is there something more? He was also speaking to somebody in earlier updates.
    I hope Khushi and ASr back up the pictures somewhere. Shyam will not let them off easily.
    -shree10

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  35. OMG, shyam likes it wired nd rough!, and khushi is FREE,,
    Love u!

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  36. Haha! Erotic asphyxiation? Takes some kicks to get the old truck started eh?
    Shyam's so kinky it's hilarious! xD
    And, I love how Arnav and Khushi are so cmfortable around each other now. And that though they haven't accepted that they wanted more than just one night to each other, they're still showing it. :D :D
    But the main question is, is that all that we have on Shyam? Kinky sex, bas? Possibly. I'd be relieved if that is so.
    And if Shyam's clean(not really) then we have NK and Gitu, right? Oooh this keeps getting more interesting. Cannot wait for the next chapter SJji.

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  37. Oh thank the heavens, an update finally! I was turning into a minute-to-minute stalker.
    Thank you SJ, for - this update, this FF, your Arnav-Khushi (after the original ones vanished), for taking time off your hectic schedule and giving us these amazing chapters - for everything! A biiiig Hug :*
    This chapter was as always, excellent!
    A refreshing one that focussed on the happier things. Away from the darkness and danger of the Sabres and their mysteries. I liked it!
    I love love love I promise I'll be patient :) Update sooooon.
    the way ASR-Khushi are progressing in their relationship. The comfort level they share, its amazing. And the sexual attraction, oh the sexual attraction! Its getting harder for them to stay away from each other.
    And I feel that the time when they finally give in is near, now that Shyam the ass is kicked out!
    Khushi - my tigress! Im so glad that she dealt with the blow she got after seeing Shyam so maturely. I love strong girls! How I 'yayed' and whistled at the scene where she clicks Shyam's photos in that position leaving him all shocked and disoriented!
    And her 'potty mouth' like you called it, hilarious! Loved it!
    So, she is free. Free! Why do I along with her, feel so liberated? :D
    Christmas is near, aha and should i expect a very hot update?

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  38. Oh thank the heavens, an update finally! I was turning into a minute-to-minute stalker.
    Thank you SJ, for - this update, this FF, your Arnav-Khushi (after the original ones vanished), for taking time off your hectic schedule and giving us these amazing chapters - for everything! A biiiig Hug :*
    This chapter was as always, excellent!
    A refreshing one that focussed on the happier things. Away from the darkness and danger of the Sabres and their mysteries. I liked it!
    I love love love the way ASR-Khushi are progressing in their relationship. The comfort level they share, its amazing. And the sexual attraction, oh the sexual attraction! Its getting harder for them to stay away from each other. I get goosebumps whenever they kiss. Hahaha.
    And I feel that the time when they finally give in to their feelings is near, now that Shyam the ass is kicked out!
    Khushi - my tigress! Im so glad that she dealt with the blow she got after seeing Shyam so maturely. I love strong girls! How I 'yayed' and whistled at the scene where she clicks Shyam's photos in that position leaving him all shocked and disoriented!
    And her 'potty mouth' like you called it, hilarious! Loved it!
    So, she is free. Free! Why do I along with her, feel so liberated? :D
    Christmas is near, aha and should i expect a very hot update?
    I promise to be patient. Just don't take too long this time. Update soon. :* Hugs and kisses!

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  39. Omfg!!!!!
    Srsly!!!??? Shyam?!!
    She's free!!:D
    Great update!

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  40. Wow...makes a big Khushi " O" face!!!!!!!
    Awesome chapter and YAy , Khushi is finally free from Shyam!

    Soloperson

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  41. Thanks for updating despite your busy life.
    surprised about shyam being such a naughty boy...
    lana

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  42. Wow Khushi and "potty mouth" I am trying hard to stop laughing at the vision of IPKKND's Khushi swearing like a trooper! I see "shades of grey" in this update! LOL!
    Very refreshing to see her this free spirited alongside a playful and sexy Arnav!
    Thanks for the update, I know you must be very busy!
    Cheers!
    Maya Di

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  43. Ahh!! thats a relief now!! seriously!! (both for the update and the content)

    Shyam!! *yuck* what.was.that?!? Gross!!! so that is why he would not allow khushi near him!?*he he he*
    i mean it surely is a relief to know that the sick ba***d never got into her tho'*chuckle*

    Ohhh glad to know that Christmas is still around the corner for the 2 love birds...*wink*

    So the sabre thingy -its not ended yet eh? he is not even on the case anymore... and she is with him now.... sounds grave to me actually!!

    shall wait and watch!!

    ~P
    IF uname - arushi_fan

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  44. And you are back with a BANG.. Phew.. am i glad to see u update or wat ?? :-) In your face Shyaam . I hope Kushi actually uses the photos to show the Scumbag his place..:-)..

    Your ASR is jus perfect... Witing to se them celebrate Christmass together ..:-)

    Keep Rocking
    Somya


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  45. Not fair, you told me that you were not sure of updating this week, so I stopped stalking.
    You are back and how?!

    I was honestly thinking that Shyam was going to turn out to be a cross dresser, but hey you do like throwing us off guard dont cha? Your twists stay so true to the story, unlike many that just stands out. Finally Kushi has one thing off her list so that she can focus on solving the mystery of the Sabres with Agent Raizada. And speaking of Agent Raizada, can we have him in a black towel please, pretty please?

    Just the usual, Updt suun yaaraz. Warna m die. TFS.

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  46. Thank you for the update dear!
    I felt like it was me who was free!
    Wow! I loved the way Khushi got back at shyam by clicking pictures in her mobile...amazing..loved the stunned face of Dr.Shyam Jha..
    Progress in Arnav-Khushi relationship is another thing which I loved!
    ASR's sharp mind is in the case still, that good he knows which ends he has to tie up now..good going...

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  47. wow this was a surprise and I loved the fact Khushi could get back at Shyam...
    I could literally feel the relief Khushi felt after knowing about Shyam's truth...
    Loved the update!

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  48. Oye Avni, teri to nikal padi. Lol... But jokes apart, thanks SJ, to make Khushi free again. Now we can have some hot and smokey moments between Arnav and Khushi.

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    1. thnks to SJ. .. IT 8 AM. in the morning n i m still phangurling...

      u can imagine my state....

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  49. oh my god....

    hi SJ....this chspter made me fall off my sofa reading who u paired with Akash....i m blushing, dhak dhak-ing, fainting n phangurling around my living room.

    thnq a million times over. i owe u big time.

    the part *whats is the motive* was such a reminder of ipk days. * bhat is da motibes?*.....i was actually waiting for khushi to blurt out we have to find out...*phind out karega padi*

    n f*cking shyam is sick....oh god that was disgusting...n i m soooo glad ASR choose to return n spare her the likes of JHA.

    her elation n excitement in the new found freedom.wad a treat to read....n oh boy seeing khushi as potty mouth was super funny...

    loved every minute of this update n it was well worth it....

    the suspense of NK N geetu is driving my nuts....but dont worry ill marvel in the glory days coming ahead n keep calm.

    update at ur convinience n i shall be her stalking it as usual...

    thnq n hugz n what not...

    avni

    still squealing in excitement.n i wonder if i shall even sleep tonite.

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  50. Awesome part SJ.. LOVED IT!!

    Aaah Shyam is such a loser..! >_>

    Aww Khushi gets her much deserved freedom.. lol

    Cant wait for next part.

    God Bless You :)

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  51. You updated...and what a way to update!! :D :D

    Of all the things I imagined Shyam to be involved in...I wouldn't have imagined this scenario.
    Am I glad that now Khushi doesn't have to be around the sick bastard anymore just because he had something he could use against her family.Now Khushi has something that can..quite literally...rock his world!

    Khushi's free finally!! AND she's with Arnav... :)

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  52. Holy mother of god.. brazzerrrrrsss

    bwahahahaha Shyam is a sexual deviant..... I am just glad he had not tortured Khushi... and squealllll she is free.. FIN-FUCKIN-LY!!!!

    Wow this is magnificent, gory, thrilling, deep and just about the right pace. Who's the BOSS? SJ is the boss.
    In your face bitches In your face. (I am sorry I had to say this out, atleast once)

    Now i know and now we all know.

    Avni got her wish eh! NICE!!!! she be very happy.

    Plague and rice and all things nice - TFS RES
    haha

    Love always
    Gitu..

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  53. Applause..SJ!!!

    I am so ecstatic ...Khushi & ASR delivered a punch..and, what an unconventional one...the ingenious ASR is conscientious..Thank heavens,now Shyam cannot be deleterious...cannot wait to read what will be their next move...

    Aanchal15-IF

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  54. You updated after so long. Thanks

    Finally khushi us free. Can't imagine Shyams face! Hahaha.. Can't wait for next

    Blablabla_mo7 IF

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  55. My reaction after reading chapter 18-holy shit wet arnie that too bare chest.and shyam u psycho.and after reading chapter 19-ha ha take that you psycho.laughed at the clicking camera in the face of shyam part.wait that means khushi has something against shyam now.so she is free now.sigh of relief finally.she needed to be far away from that man.thank god.actually thank arnie.awesome adventure sj.shinaa

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  56. wowoowowowo what the hell happend
    iam happy that i read shades of grey and 80 days to think what shyam is but i never thought that these will be hes true colour but it was a faboulas update :D

    IF gilmore

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  57. Hi,
    I am loving your updates! The storyline is brilliant =)
    Sorry for the lack of comments, I've been busy so reading quite a few updates in one go!

    P x

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  58. Finally shyams secret is out. Kushi has enough ammunition on him to keep his mouth shut.
    please update soon.

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  59. Oh lord, you made hating Shyam super fun. I dislike the man and how?

    I felt the relief Khushi felt and what a team we have in Arnav and Khushi.

    It does get better with each update.

    -Kalyaani (IF)

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  60. Wow worth the wait!! Thanks for another fabulous and exciting update. Appreciate your making time for the story despite your ultra busy life. Oh what a wonderful feeling for Khushi to feel FREE!!

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  61. Shyamu is always up to something weird. And disliking him comes so easy and its fun!!!

    I am loving the bond which is steadily developing between Khushi & Arnav. Its very heartwarming. :)

    Looking forward to the next chapter and finding out more about the Sabers.

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  62. a big OMG for Shyam.

    Khushi and Arnav finally caught him red handed..

    and Shyam is just weird, sex crazed, likes it kinky and a huge freak.

    -Smarties-

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  63. are you planning on giving me a chapter 20

    i want one nowww

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  64. That was 0ne hell 0f a chapter!! Shyam babuwa is kinky and Khushi t00k pictures!! R0FL. S0me secret that was SJ. Abs0lutely l0ved it!!

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  65. Hot damn!! I would have never expected shyam to be into that!!1 omg! khushi stumbled onto the mother load!! brilliant!

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  66. So the creep was caught in the act .. :-O .. I hope Khushi actually uses the photos to show the scumbag his place .... Loved A's reaction to K's excitement ... no FBI.. no Shyaam ..only A-K and the mystery of the sabres..i guess the real adventure begins now.. cant wait for more ..:-)

    Somya

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  67. love the fact that arnav shares all the details and includes khushi in the decision making process... they are truly a team, whereas with shyam khushi was merely a pawn who has to do as she was told! thank god the truth about shyam is finally out and khushi is free of him, though I don't know how she would be able to share this side to shyam with her parents! really thankful that shyam didn't forcibly introduce khushi to this world! khushi having the courage and the sense to click photos was good... also glad they weren't harmed by the bouncers and that they made good their escape! can't wait to see where their further investigations lead!

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  68. OMG SJ what an update I was just imagining sham's face when Kyushu clicked the photos must been hilarious if was a movie.hehehe all I say loved the update n can't wait for the next. God Bless u

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  69. when will u update...i've been waitin for a really long time...:(

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  70. This was quite an update...I have been unable to post comments from my IPad for the last few updates. Sorry about that. So this is Shyam's real face? hmm...why do I feel this is not really the end of his story..that he will be back with a vengeance?
    I just love this storyline and how you deal with the different scenarios that you present. love this ride that you are taking us on.

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  71. Hi SJ...
    Awesome chapter...i cant stop thinking of Shyamwa's reaction as Khushi cliked his pics, lol...What a JERKING Freak ;) LMAO.
    BTW, When are you planning to update missy :) I cant wait to read the next chapter now -__-
    update sooonishhhhhhhh :P
    tc, love
    JIA (Pinkss)

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  72. When's the next update coming SJ? Too long its been :(

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  73. loved it loved it loved it loved it :) I can relate to Khushi's feeling of being free. Amazing update dear.

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  74. Can't wait.... When is the next coming?....

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  75. Can't wait.... When is the next coming?....

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  76. SJ, where are you dear? Everything all right at your end?

    -shree10

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  77. Marry christmas.... Plz update

    Neag (india-forums)

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  78. Marry christmas.... Plz update

    Neag (india-forums)

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  79. MERRY X'MAS
    plz update

    Neag (india-forums)

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  80. MERRY CHRISTMAS

    PLZ UPDATE

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  81. wow what an update...din't see that coming ..glad that kushi is free...continue soon....

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  82. Yeh, i am back..and Christmas is still not over..

    Wow!....loved the update...

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  83. Yeh!!! I am Back..
    and Christmas is still not Over....
    loved the update SJ.....
    Shyam now did he know Khushi took his pictures? what is his next step?
    By the way Happy New Year 2013 SJ
    arshiyana(IF)

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  84. ROFLOL!! Asphyxiation! So happy Khushi is free!!

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  85. So read your disclaimer at the start & dove straight into the chapter with bated breath!!!

    Was a great update, I was laughing my head off at reading it & finally knowing what rocks Shyam's boat sexually although I had thought he may be gay!!!

    Only complaint was the promised sexual deviant act in the disclaimer didn't appear :(( LOL!!!

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