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Tuesday, October 23, 2012

Chapter 6 - No Turning Back


Khushi fell fast asleep for the first time in days since the attack in her apartment. The soft rock music, the lull of driving on the long stretch of the highway and most of all him, ASR, made her feel safe. She was out in no time. 

He watched her rolling head. He wanted to reach and cushion her neck so that those delectable layers of skin and muscle around her neck didn’t strain as it lolled about. He knew it was wrong to feel attracted to his charge, more so when the case meant so much to him. He had a bone to pick with the Russian Mafia and he couldn't let his vulnerability get the better of him again. He couldn't let them win.  His uncontrolled feelings for her made it unsafe for her and for him. He couldn't do that. Not ever, not again.

The skies clouded and a thin drizzle set the roads slippery. A good number of cars were on the highway, presumably headed north for a good ski season. He checked the rear view mirror and the red PT cruiser immediately caught his attention. He accelerated the car and shifted lanes, all the while checking the rear view mirror. The PT cruiser followed.

“Shit!” he cursed under his breath. If they were being followed, it would do no good to head to their destination. If their safe house and cover were blown, Khushi’s life would once again be in danger. His eyes squinted in anger as he gnashed his teeth. He pressed the blue tooth to call NK.

“Yeah, NK. We are being followed. Listen, send a different car, something more suitable for ice not a fucking minivan. I am close to exit 32 near Lake Forest. Send it to the Whole foods store parking lot, I will be there in a half hour.”

Satisfied with the alternate arrangements, he sped his car, cutting many cars earning him several honks. The cruiser followed him and shifted lanes with him. He knew the minivan was not equipped to make sudden shifts on icy road and the driving was definitely unsafe. He made a swift shift to right lane and zoomed in to the exit ramp. The PT cruiser was caught off guard as it tried to weed through the cars to follow them.

“Fuck! The motherfucker just exited on the ramp!” the driver for the PT cruiser cursed. His companion, a severely tattooed man with ugly teeth and porous skin grinned.

“You can’t lose his trail David. Take the ramp now, now, now.” He ordered his lackey David.

“Are you out of your mind, Noam” Without warning Noam grabbed the steering wheel and made a fast swerve to the exit. 

The car slipped on sleet and swerved out of control. David hit the breaks hard and the car screeched to a halt. The two men breathed relief before another honking car came careening behind them and hit the stationary car hard on its rear fender. The PT cruiser skidded off the road and overturned on the mucky grass on the side. Two more cars screeched brakes, and crashed into the car that had hit the cruiser. More cars followed. 

Sounds of metal clanging and crushing were followed by mild explosions and rising smoke. More cars screeched some succeeding to stop before becoming a part of the pile up. ASR slowed on the ramp and looked back to find the pile up on the highway. 

He found the men stumble out of the PT cruiser and scramble out of the dirt. The two stood up and saw the van in a distance rolling away slowly on the ramp. ASR caught the look in their faces, he could not tell who they were, but he saw one of them show him the finger. ASR smirked. 

That ought to keep them occupied but he knew they had no time.He hit the pedal and zoomed out of the ramp and quickly disappeared into the traffic.  A ten car pile up on the highway, Sweet, ASR thought and zoomed out of sight.

“Damn you! Noam. Now you got half the county officers looking for us.” David got out of the misshapen door. Noam coughed and tumbled out of the passenger side door.
Noam flipped his cell and called speed dial.
“Hello, Boss. We got a problem here.” He recited the events. There was silence on the other side.
“Boss? Did you hear me?” Noam repeated

A long second later, the thick accented voice on the other side cracked through. The voice spoke with deliberate and a thickly accented emphasis on each word, "I do not have to tell you how important the girl is. I don’t care for the minutiae of your pathetic daily existence. Get the snitch to talk. Do what it takes. Just make sure the girl is captured alive. And don’t call me unless you have good news.” 

A blank dial tone indicated that the conversation was over.

Noam knew Boss was dead serious about the girl. Distant sirens of police cars signaled the impending doom. He had to work fast. He punched another number in his phone, one he had dared not save on his cell to avoid any trouble.

“Why the hell did you call me on this number?” the voice on the other side blasted.
“Listen, it’s an emergency. Boss wanted me to tell you, we lost the tail. We need to know where our bird is headed.”
“Don’t ever call me on this number. I will find out and call you from a pay phone, give me an hour. And listen carefully, don’t make this a habit.”

The phone clicked. Bloody Snitch thought Noam and waited for the call.

ASR pulled the car to the large parking of the superstore car lot. It was easier to hide in plain sight with throngs of weekend shoppers filling the hug lot. The black SUV caught his attention and he pulled over. Khushi has slept through the entire ordeal.

He parked next to the SUV and used the master key to open the car. It worked. He got around the van and opened the door to khushi’s side. She was fast asleep and….breathtakingly beautiful. He shook her gently. She moaned and shifted in the seat. Shit! You do that one more time and I…and what ASR? Stop this.
She blinked her eyes open and looked straight at him. ASR was afraid she read his inner demonic and unholy thoughts. She looked blank and took a second to orient herself. Then she sat up with a start.

“Oh Shit! Are we there? I slept like a log.”
She began to unbuckle and rush out.
“Easy, Khushi. We need to change cars. We were being followed and we need a decoy.”
“No! oh jeez, please, which car, where, tell me what to do.” She was frantic and her cheeks turned beet red with the rush of excitement. He wanted it. Shut up!

They settled in the new car and headed out. The next 3 hours Khushi was nothing but an incessant chatter box. She had questions about the Sabres, and he didn’t have answers for her. He had questions for her about her associations, friends or any leads that can connect her to the Sabres. She didn’t have any answers for him. They settled on their common like for classic rock that played in a loop in the radio. She sang along with the Queen, AC/DC numbers and he got more smitten by the minute by her sheer resilience. One minute she was questions and worries, the next she was a bohemian, carefree, spirited and he wanted her. Real bad, so bad, it hurt. Shut up, you moron, she is under your protective custody.

The SUV pulled into the long graveled passage leading to a handsome cottage set on the brink of Lake Michigan. Tall pines and firs shrouded a part of the cabin while the lake shimmered under a layer of thin ice. Winds had picked up speed and sent a quiver among leavers.
“Oh God. This is beautiful!” she exclaimed, her mouth agape in an “O”.

He smiled and pulled into the parking space next to the cabin. She helped him with the luggage and they entered the fully furnished cabin.

“Does FBI always book resorts for its charges?” she asked blowing a short whistle at the huge French windows overhanging the steep slope that ended in the lake.
“Only for the special ones.” He winked with a wicked smile and headed to the corridor separating the bedrooms. Khushi followed him and noted with satisfaction that there were two bedrooms on the opposite side of the corridor. It was small but comfortable and given the circumstances, she could not complain. There was common bathroom at the end of the hallway. Not ideal she thought and exhaled.

 “I’d like to shower, its been the longest day of my life. Do you mind if I use the bathroom first?” she asked.
“Sure, I will get a pot of coffee going and see what we can do for dinner.” He offered as he set the luggage in their respective rooms. She was relieved to see him disappear around the corner of the corridor into the small kitchenette.

She unpacked her meager belongings and checked her phone. There were 3 missed calls from Gitu and 6 from her parents and 10 from Shyam. Shit, better call them. She dialed her dad first and informed him of her whereabouts. Next, she called Gitu and got her voice mail. She decided to text her instead.

Reached Door safely, with hottie. Pray for me that I survive him.

Gitu's text appeared promptly.

Call me when you settle. And hottie? make the best use of your time. Greek God don't happen every day.

Will do, love. Muah! Khushi texted back.

She decided to hold off on calling shyam. Let him stew a bit more for being the insensitive bastard that he has proven to be. Then she rethought for a second and decided to send him a text as well.
Reached Door safe, will talk to you when things get calmer.

She was sure her text hadn't made it to him before she got a text back from him.

Call me, asap. Need to talk to you.
I am tired. It will have to wait.
Later tonite?
Maybe

Control freak. she exhaled and took her change of clothes. 

She locked the bathroom door and rested her back on it. For the first time in the day, she found a few moments to herself. The tears came welling back. She missed her parents, she missed her life, and she knew the Sabres were going to be the end of her. 

What do those Sabres have to do with me? She thought rhetorically. 

A dull ache formed in her head and she knew in order to reclaim her life, she would have to solve the mystery of the Sabres. She needed to talk to her dad in person. There must be something in her life, her past, her family that connects her to the spate of crimes. She sighed and got into the shower.

ASR got his cup of coffee and settled in the cozy living room. He had changed into his sporty shorts and t-shirt. He knew the shower would have to wait because Khushi had been in there for over an hour. Her soft hums intermingled with the sound of running water had an oddly calming effect on him. He had almost forgotten how good it felt to be with a woman. 

Warmth, floral, softness…Lana. He closed his eyes and reclined on the sofa.

The memories came flooding back. Lana emerged from a bright haze of light smiling. She was beautiful as always, ethereal and angelic. She tugged his arm and ran across the green lawn into a small canopied altar under the clear blue skies. She was in her long, form fitting white gown, her long thick tresses were unfairly hidden in the headdress and they revolted by letting lose a few thick curls on either side of her long neck. Her pink lips smiled, revealing perfect rows of teeth.

“Arnav, will you marry me?” she leaned forward and whispered near his ears and he shivered in anticipation. He could feel her so close to him. He snaked his arms around her waist and pulled her closer. He looked down to see a red spot growing out in diameter near her abdomen. He felt the spot and it was wet. He pulled her away and screamed, “Lana!”

“Good bye Arnav, take care of yourself.” She smiled as she faded away.

He screamed again, “Lana!”

Khushi shook him by his shoulders.

“ASR! ASR! Wake up. Are you alright?” she looked worried and bewildered. He must have dozed off and dreamt of Lana. He had buried her memories back in the recesses of his mind, but Khushi had unearthed those memories. He got up unsteadily on his feet.

“I….I am fine. Did you shower, I think I should shower.” He gently nudged her away and began walking.

“Listen, if you need something to calm your nerves, I have something for you.” She offered. 

He almost burst laughing. He did not need to calm his nerves. He needed this adrenaline rush, the festering wound inside him, the constant pain and reminder of why he was on this mission. And he could not rest easy until he got those bastards who were responsible for Lana’s death. There was no turning back.

“No, no drugs.” He answered with more force than necessary. She raised her hands in mock surrender and smiled. She deserved to be safe, and lead a happy life. Perhaps, he was wrong in his hasty decision to pull her into his mess. She was innocent and unaware how really dangerous the guys following her were. As if on cue, she broke into a smile. He was lost again.

No, he would not let history repeat itself. He had to protect her as he could not let Khushi suffer like his Lana did. There was no turning back.

*****

“We found her. Snitch told us that the bird is in Door county. We are on our way.” Noam informed the Boss.
“Good.” The man replied and hung up.

Damn him. Not even a word of thanks. When this is all over, I better get a good promotion in the ranks or truckloads of money. Then Mariam and I can go off to live in Montana in our ranch. 

54 comments:

  1. ahan me first or i suppose not... I have the insomnia and Arnav has the adrenalin can we just use that?

    LOL

    Lana generates curiosity in me and well ofcourse Arnav..
    Khushi and Arnav are breathtakingly sizzling..

    I loved the road rash and car pile up.. Nice!!!

    Who the fuck is this guy who is giving them the lead?
    Presumably NK? Cos he's the one who can trace ASR at any given time.

    Sorry for randomly guessing.

    THANK FUCKIN HEAVENS FOR AN UPDATE

    I love you MUAH!

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    1. Id be dissapointed with Hotwa if it were that easy........I am lana....

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  2. Mariam? Jujiji's got a damaad eh?
    And, oooooohhhh
    This is so fast paced and exciting.
    I bet Gitu's the Snitch. LOLLL
    Shyam is toh too stupid to be one ya.
    And Mamma-Papa are too sweet. Ergo, Geetli=Snitch.

    Also, Arnav and Khushi seem so meant for each other. I loved how he calmed down just by hearing her hum. That is so sweet! Awwnnn

    Okay, stay in a blanket to keep yourself safe from the hailstorm and write the next update woman!



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  3. GOING to catch up on six chapters

    TFS for not sharing

    RES4EVA

    kthnxbye!

    Tiya

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    1. abbey dont get mad. I shared in our usual adda but it was lost in transition....:))
      chal no issues, read and enjoy and comment comment comment.

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  4. Res...
    will back at the evening..

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    1. back at busness!!!!
      So, Arnav had past..Lana!!
      What's their story, Was it serious? ummm I'm hoping it will revealed it later
      Your title really suited the chapter. There is no turning back now. He has to stick with her now..
      I am suspecting Shyam..it's weird but u know show has impact on me..he..he
      snow place..cold!! heated body can I expect more!!!!??
      Loved it....

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  5. Thanks for the update ! Loved it
    Arnav is so attracted to Kushi and Kushi should follow Gitu's advice. I just love this character.
    Who is the snitch ? Is it NK
    Arnav & Kushi are perfect for each other very excited to see how the story moves
    Update soon dear. Happy Dassera !
    Kavita1970

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  6. Finally SJ I was staring to get impatient!!! Bechara Arnav he was in love with a girl and now she's gone thanks for the update SJ :)

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  7. Wow. You finally updated.
    And you have got my adrenaline high. I had given up on this genre and had refused to touch anything other than romance and now you have sparked my interest again.
    Today is vijay dashmI. They say what you do today you will do for the whole year. So will I be reading your ff for the whole year since that is what I did as soon as I woke up :-P

    So who s the snitch, in order of guilty in my mind - Shyam (too obvious), Shashi and Gitu. Your khushi is still a darling and thanks for again making her so.
    Happy vijay dashmi.

    A

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  8. so just read all six chapters in one go and boy i must say its like watching an action with a lil bit of romance movie....i could just feel the excitement whn the whole pile up happened....and the chemistry between the two is just mind blowing....lol Shyam as usual is annoying but i love the other 4 :)....ummm a question though being in protective custody isnt she told tht she is nt suppose to tell anyone abt her whereabouts...lol i thought her whereabouts for the next few months had to be a secret :P....nyways hmm although a part of my brain tells me the snitch is smeone who is actualy really close and trusted aka pointing towards Gitu....coz if it was NK thn he wouldnt have to find out coz he already knws but the Snitch said tht they will find out and let thm knw...hmmm...BUT coz i love her character i will just block tht part of my brain and just make myself happy thinking it is Shyam coz he is so super annoying tht i cant wait for the part where Khushi dumps him :D....all in all this is an awesme FF love it....amazing writing and all tht goes with complementing an awesome writer

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  9. Read Chapter 5 and 6 together.

    Shyam- the man is a cartoon! I could just imagine his expression at the beginning of chapter 5.

    The shaking off the trail sequence-- super cool!

    This ASR is just too hot! I want!!

    Shouldn't Khushi NOT be making calls while she is in Protective custody unless its an untraceable phone? :/

    I wonder who the Snitch is? I feel like its Shyam!

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  10. Fast-paced chapter. The men following them seemed to be a couple of bumbling idiots. But who is the snitch who's giving them the info? Someone from Arnav's office, even from his team? That's not a happy thought. Or is it even Shyam? Please please not Gitu or NK?
    A thought struck me...was it wise for Khushi to reveal the location of the safe house? Protective custody locations should be completely secret, even from close family members, na? For the victim's safety as well as her family's. And does Arnav know she's told them?
    So the woman from his past is named Lana. Russian? Waiting to read more on the connection with the Mafia.

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  11. Fast-paced chapter. The men following them seemed to be a couple of bumbling idiots. But who is the snitch who's giving them the info? Someone from Arnav's office, even from his team? That's not a happy thought. Or is it even Shyam? Please please not Gitu or NK?
    A thought struck me...was it wise for Khushi to reveal the location of the safe house? Protective custody locations should be completely secret, even from close family members, na? For the victim's safety as well as her family's. And does Arnav know she's told them?
    So the woman from his past is named Lana. Russian? Waiting to read more on the connection with the Mafia.

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  12. Hey! I read chapter 5 and 6 together!! Loved it!!

    The whole Shyam sequence was just hilarious!! I could just imagine his constipated expression while 'frozen' and then ASR's 'Unfreeze'!! ha ha

    I loved Khushi trying to control her temper and I'm right with her when she wants to punch Shyam in the face, I'd like to also dunk a cartoon hammer on his head. Control freaks are really annoying.

    This ASR is just too hot Dammit! I want!!

    I love how the plot is picking up, with little bits from the past.

    And shouldn't Khushi NOT be making calls unless they're from an untraceable phone while she is in PC? :/

    I wonder who the snitch is! Shyam being it would be too predictable? or not?

    Excited and waiting to read more! :)

    - Mirka88 (formerly rakrasirutsak)

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  13. nice update... loved how arnav outmanoeuvred the goons, though a bit worried about the innocents hurt... thank god khushi slept through it all or it might just have added to her trauma... the snitch seems to be coming up trumps: could it be shyam? that would be too predictable, I guess! foolish, though understandably human, of khushi to text her friends and call her folks...arnav on a mission of revenge for the murder of his love is a treat to read about! love seeing him fighting his attraction to khushi... it could endanger them both, ut know it's a losing fight! the boss, with his interest in khushi, sounds scary!

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  14. Lana...beautiful name...seems like she was shot...
    And of course Arnav is the only one who can cause a ten car pile up!
    I'm going to calm down my brain which is going on overdrive trying to figure out who the snitch is...I shall have to wait though won't I?
    Oh well...awesome update!!!

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  15. Ohhhhh I loved the fast paced action. Thanks for updating. Will be back to comment more. RES

    Naach_Basanti

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  16. Finally! Have been stalking this blog...like literally 10 times a day! Fab update! As usual thrilling and left us at a cliffhanger at the end. Loved it!

    The plot gets better and better by the minute...they found A & K so soon! I guess the information about them is from an insider so they are going to be pretty much on the run! I just wish Khushi had not made those calls! Obviously ASR doesn't know about them!

    Love the chemistry......and Lana is ASR's past who he lost to the same thugs...uffff...

    Pease please please update soon...pretty please? :D

    Cheers!
    Rayolight

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  17. Finally! Have been stalking this blog...like literally 10 times a day! Fab update! As usual thrilling and left us at a cliffhanger at the end. Loved it!

    The plot gets better and better by the minute...they found A & K so soon! I guess the information about them is from an insider so they are going to be pretty much on the run! I just wish Khushi had not made those calls! Obviously ASR doesn't know about them!

    Love the chemistry......and Lana is ASR's past who he lost to the same thugs...uffff...

    Pease please please update soon...pretty please? :D

    Cheers!
    Rayolight

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  18. Finally ... ;)

    Just love the new look of the blog ...

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    1. The Music selection is amazing ... goes very well with the excitement and fast pace of the update ...
      "Call me when you settle. And hottie? make the best use of your time. Greek God don't happen every day..." a true friends advise ... ;)
      Wonder who the snitch is ???

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  19. Oh noooo...there's a snitch , now the guessing games begin! Hmmm Shyamu :D

    "Greek God don't happen every day." siiigghhhh Make him forget the Lana hangover Khushi ;)))))
    Lana sounds like a beautiful connection - what do these collection of sabres do? Need to re-read the prologue!

    -preetihere on IF

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  20. Oh noooo...there's a snitch , now the guessing games begin! Hmmm Shyamu :D

    "Greek God don't happen every day." siiigghhhh Make him forget the Lana hangover Khushi ;)))))
    Lana sounds like a beautiful connection - what do these collection of sabres do? Need to re-read the prologue!

    -preetihere on IF

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  21. Now I want to know who this snitch is!!! I'm glad u updated!!!! I want to know more about Shyam and Kushi... Like us she in love with him or is he someone she can't get rid off?

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  22. Obviously khushi should have nt made any calls. Ad arnav has a past, I'm guessing she died in the crossfire.
    Greek god doesn't happen everyday, sigh** that is so true

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  23. Gitu is so cute, the greek god comment was really funny!!

    Great story, I really love the concept!! Keep going ;)



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  24. So Arnav's history is about to repeat itself. His trying to maintain a professional facade when his libido is trying to the opposite, just makes me wanna cuddle him & smooch him to death...poor baby, trying to be a gentleman but having thoughts of a rake!!LOL.
    OK...i'm taking a wild, wild, guess that NK is the snitch!!! Don't shoot me, but that's how my mind works....The mystery of the sabers is getting very, very interesting. How the hell did Shashi & by association K, get involved in this conundrum???? The buildup to both the romance & the danger is breathtaking & i'm so looking forward to the next update.
    PS- Thank you for updating & hence saving me the indignity of trying to explain to my future grandchildren why granny looked like she was croaking when in reality she was hyperventilating....in a good way!!!!!LOL

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  25. SJ! You updated! Yay!

    Whatay chapter!
    ASR has a past? Lana. Aww, he's afraid to love. It would be interesting to read how Khushi makes him forget Lana slowly.
    Your description of ASR makes me want to just snatch him for myself away from anyone and everyone! Loved Khushi and Gitu's convo about him .. 'hottie' 'greek god' .. *drool*
    So who is the 'Bloody Snitch'?
    Waiting to read more of this awesome stuff, its so intriguing dammit!

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  26. A white knuckler!!! The chase and then the collision was so realistic....and, fact that the Russian mafia are responsible for the tragedy in Arnav's life, was shocking...so, their situation will be compromised, anon, now that the mafia has become cognizant of their whereabouts, thanks to the mole in the department...a cliff hanger , once again! So impatient for the next and loved the BG!!

    Aanchal

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  27. An update at last....and loooved it..lulumarjan

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  28. First of all, I love the new theme. So apt.

    Arnav loves weaving his way through the mess, doesn't he? Be it the pile of cars or Khushi I love how you've described the pull between them so flawlessly.
    The snitch. What the effwa! Tell me it's snakewa!
    Lana. There's always a past, a story, a reason, a force. And Arnavs' revealed, though vaguely.

    Great update.

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  29. The chase/getaway scene - loved the pace of the scene and the pace of your writing. I can't believe she slept through it!! My crush on Arnav grew with that scene and then grew exponentially upon learning about Lana - a broken heart, the girl he loved but couldn't save. It's no wonder he's fighting his attraction to Khushi.
    Damn I wished she hadn't texted anyone about her whereabouts - I'm not going to hazard a guess about the snitch but of course any communication out is dangerous. The intrigue and suspense continues!!

    Amrita

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  30. Thrilling update! Who is the snitch? Was it appropriate of Khushi to make those calls? And there are sabres.. Mysterious past.. It's darkening with each update. Already waiting for the next one :)

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  31. Snitch!! I bet it's Shyamu! Didn't she text him that she reached Door safely? Oh well, of course I'd like to believe its him rather thank think its NK or Gitu! Or the parents. :(

    The 10 car pile up was amazingly funny, and yet very descriptive! Which idiot takes a red PT cruiser to tail someone? Thats like jumping up and down saying 'pick me! Pick me!' are you indicating at the lack of brightness amongst the lower echelons of the mafia? ;)

    Lana, hmm. Who is she and did this really happen on their wedding day or was that just the dream!?

    Sharing a bathroom! Sizzle!

    Thank you!
    JerryTheMouse - Sachi

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  32. Hey,this s getting more interesting and adventurous.

    Chase was really thrilling and lukd realistic

    Geetu s always cute. Shyam, dono why i suspect his role with mafia....will wait and watch
    Luna.....she sounds like greek godess. ...
    ASR how far s he gonna control his adrenalin rush.....poor baby

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  33. Im really curious about what happened with Lana... I know this has been said too many times, but oh my god, ASR is sooo hot in this story!
    The attraction from Arnavs side is growing, love the insights into his mind... This was a great chapter!

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  34. Another great update..love the action packed thrills! A brooding, protective Arnav makes for a sizzling hot Arnav:-)I wonder who the snitch is though? Somehow I don't think its NK..

    Loved it!

    Palz101

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  35. My love for this ASR is increasing with each update.

    Arnav's past is making him keep indifferent towards Khushi..Did he loose her due to his job..I am really curious to know.

    -Smarties-

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  36. Lana? The hot ASR have a bitter past or what? cant wait to know more! great updt.
    latha

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  37. There's always a past isn't there??? One that always comes up and troubles you when you least expect it to??
    Arnav's was revealed here....partially....
    Ha! Loved his pull towards Khushi....described very well indeed!!
    As for the pile up....that was thrilling to read!
    Who is this snitch???

    Keep them coming! :D :D

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  38. Loved this long awaited update.

    And the plot's getting more thrilling!!

    oceanssea(IF)

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  39. So...this is personAl for Arnav...Lana.....interesting....
    Poor khushi....I wish her father tells her....
    One house...one washroom.....this is going to get good ;)
    rabzooo

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  40. Who is this snitch? I am so intrigued! Cannot be NK, because otherwise they would know where Arnav was already headed - so it means that it's someone who is not completely in on the minute-to-minute plans.

    Great work on keeping the suspense alive! :)


    ~K

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  41. There is a mole among them.. Very intriguing.. Going on to Read the next chapters
    Peepli

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  42. So, I havent read the next couple of chapters yet but this new character, Snitch, hmmmm, it has got to be snakewa cause khushi texted she reached Door safely. plus, i hate him, so thats another valid point, right?
    Thanks for the updates!!!

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  43. Heyy *NEW READER* awesomeee ....it really wasss o wpnder who snitvh it ? This has got me hanging on a loose thread :_)

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  44. Just started reading and loving it so far!! Loving kkg and asr in a modern american setting. Its a completely different perspective.
    Sd

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  45. I am hoping the snitch is Shyam!!! hate him :P

    Lana...hmmmmm Itching to skip some chapters!! :D

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  46. Another brilliant update!!!

    I wonder who this snitch is!!!

    Eager to read the next part, fighting sleep, hoping I will be able to read it!!!

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